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    Feedback on 2 different landing page versions

    Hi there,

    I have two landing pages for my storytelling site I am launching next month, and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on which of the two sites you find more compelling and inviting. The real goal is to try and get pre launch sign-ups in order to get committed viewers come launch day. The basis of the site is to be able to share intimate stories thoughts and advice, to promote vulnerability that shy's away from the shallow content most social media platforms have today.

    Below are the two different versions:

    version 1

    version 2

    Thank you so much for the feedback, I've been stressing about these two for wayyyy too long.

    Cheers,
    Nikita

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    Junior Member Jetstorm's Avatar
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    To be honest, both designs look great, but that picture of a beach somehow doesn't seem related to the theme of the site at all (not that I have any idea what would be better suited for the task, though).
    If I had to pick one, I'd say version 2.

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    The second one is much better in my opinion . I really enjoy looking at it .
    What I don`t like is : flashing background movie . Maybe you could try to slow it down a little .
    I really like the night sky image background . Also in the second page - "THE DESIRE TO LEAVE OUR MARK"" text with stars icon under it doesn`t look good . You should remove it or use different icon .

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    Definitely version 2! Also, great concept. You got me interested!

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    I like the 1st for simplicity.

    The 2nd just has too much text and moving parts.

    How much time did it take to coordinate all those animations by the way?

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    Both are very good but I like version 2 better. The moving background movie or whatever does go a bit fast though, if you could slow it down just a little bit would be good.


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