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Thread: Please review my web design book launch page

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    Smile Please review my web design book launch page

    Hi guys,

    I'm working on this book and I'd like to get an overall idea of what you think of this:

    Kick *** in Web Design

    Thanks in advance

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    Now im only reviewing this from my phone so it may be different when viewed on a desktop, but i doubt it.

    Its pretty boring. Theres nothing that catches my attention. Well thats a lie, the poor choice in colors caught my attention but in a negative way. For it to be called Kick *** i would have expected every aspect to kick *** which the design does not. Then i see your free chapter button is causing me to scroll horizontally..

    Most of these may not seem important until i consider you are trying to sell me a book on how to kick *** with web design on a website that doesnt show you know what you are talking about? Or maybe you didnt realize how important it was until i brought it up? Either way you want to look at it, from what ive seen you have shown me nothing to make me interested in your book and Id assume im in your target market? Being a web designer and all


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    Quote Originally Posted by Vapr_Arts View Post
    Now im only reviewing this from my phone so it may be different when viewed on a desktop, but i doubt it.

    Its pretty boring. Theres nothing that catches my attention. Well thats a lie, the poor choice in colors caught my attention but in a negative way. For it to be called Kick *** i would have expected every aspect to kick *** which the design does not. Then i see your free chapter button is causing me to scroll horizontally..

    Most of these may not seem important until i consider you are trying to sell me a book on how to kick *** with web design on a website that doesnt show you know what you are talking about? Or maybe you didnt realize how important it was until i brought it up? Either way you want to look at it, from what ive seen you have shown me nothing to make me interested in your book and Id assume im in your target market? Being a web designer and all


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    Ahh, I've known the design seems pretty bad. Overall, the test was to see if people would be interested despite. Which, so far, I get a decent amount of subscribers on a daily basis.

    After hearing this, it looks like a nice improvement in the design would increase my results.

    Hearing this from my target audience means a lot. I'll take it to heart and make a revision.

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    I'm not commenting on the design. I'm commenting on #4.

    I'm not sure what you're trying to accomplish there, but if you tell me you're going to show me how to legally steal something, I am not going to read any further.
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