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    y0.

    I've got a concept idea that i drew up today...

    I would love to hear what you think about it.

    I'd like to make this site as good as possible so please add your comments (good and bad).

    http://me.kippage.com/concept/prototype_03.jpg

    Please note...the grey background will be the background colour of the entire page...with the site being in the middle.

    Thanks

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    A bit too much white space on the right panel thing, but overall it's pretty good.

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    To me it looks like the beginnings of a nice site.

    Maybe you could add a little color to the site, other than some colored text.

    There does seem to be an awful amount of empty space, but as you say this is just a concept layout.

    Overall I think a little more color, maybe some eye candy, it looks like a good start, just needs some sprucing up!!
    The future will be kind to me, for I intend to write it.

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    I don't get it. Is it a portfolio site or is it a site about Driftnet?

    I also think it's got too much white space. You could actually fill that out quite nicely by making the text a little bigger. This would serve the dual purpose of making it easier to read.

    Other than that, I feel pretty much the same way everyone else does.
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    Hmmm at the moment i can't think of much to add...

    I went and grabbed a stock photo just then...changed the opacity of it and put it over the top of the nav...not sure how it goes so i thought i'd see what you think

    http://me.kippage.com/concept/prototype_03_2.jpg

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    I don't get it. Is it a portfolio site or is it a site about Driftnet?
    Sorry that's just an example of a piece of work that is in my portfolio. Perhaps i should make it clearer where you currently are on the site.

    I tried changing the pixel size to 12...but i really didn't like it.

    I guess a feature i could add in would be to change the size of the site. You obviously prefer larger text...where as other people my like smaller text (like myself). Thankyou for your analysis

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    The picture in the nav is an improvement, but it's not quite there yet. The picture looks better than the white space, but the text is slightly harder to read with it in there. I think if the nav text was larger, it'd be more ledgible.

    Also, those boxes you have in the nav look like they could work, but I'm not sure what they are right now.

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    Much better improvement over the 1st one. I was thinking you should add some table borders around your main sections to make them stand out more and a different background color for the main table.

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    The background image on the nav is certainly an improvement, but I agree with spluffdaddy, strains the eyes trying to read the text.
    The future will be kind to me, for I intend to write it.

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    hey d31,

    I like the first one and the small text.
    don't think the pic will really work, unless you could fade it to the left.

    keep up the good work!


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