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    here's my new site http://www.kirmandesign.co.uk/ ok it's not my best lol i must admit there are things even i dont like about it..

    The image on the profile page has links to new windows about me but i havent made them yet so dont wondur why they dont work lol


    The contacts page is being remade cuz i want it to be the same size as the rest etc.. and plus i changed host so ma cgi wont b working now...

    just tell me wot ya think
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    It's good. I like it

    Kirman Design - your home page at the top - it isn't a hyperlink, so why is is underlined...? (the same as the header for all your pages).

    You need to sort out your grammar and spelling:
    If there's something wrong with a friend's / relative's computer they all know my number and make use of my service's because they know that I'm reliable and know what i'm doing.
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    I'm not saying I'm excellent but there are at least three mistakes on that page. You need to get at least two other people to proof read it to spot 99% of mistakes. Mainly it is just apostrophe's when you don't actually need them.

    You need to retake the picture of the printer on your services page - it has a finger mark on the camera lens (I think?). Plus your image on the contact page is not found

    A suggestion for your contact page - For "service" box on quote form, how about having a dropdown menu to select this? Just an idea.

    I am a freelance web designer from a town called Grimsby
    I liked the above sentence more when it said "I am a freelance web designer from Grimsby, England". I would have it say "I am a Freelance Web Designer from Grimsby, United Kingdom", or "UK". I think it sounds more "grown up".

    Your website title - "Kirman Design - The freelance Web Designer that brings colour to the World Wide Web" - I think that "freelance" should have the "F" capitalised if Web and Designer have the first letter capitalised.

    That's all from me - I've bin a bit picky I guess, and it's taken me 15 minutes to write this lol .
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    Justlivyalife brings up some good points. Links being underlined, and non-links not being underlined is something I definately agree with. Also, the "Contact" link in your footer isn't underlined, it looks just like the copyright notice, which is not a link. I'd underline that contact link.

    It may just be me, but the right side of your site looks a little busy with all those outlines of all the different boxes. Making the right side a part of the top and bottom bars may look better, I dunno. Nice work.

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    lol i couldnt see what you meant about the printer image finger mark.. but i edited it in photoshop so its kinda a painted feel to it.. looks ok ..

    o and the contact page..

    didnt i say i was we doing it ? lol

    yer spelling is a bit poo just like my spell check lol..

    im remaking it all now anyhow
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    lol im binning that design lol.. i dont like it
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    With some more work, that design could work. It's clean and simple, which is a good thing. Try removing some of the lines on the right side to make it a little cleaner.

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    thats wot i dont like about it spluf...

    www.kirmandesign.co.uk/v2 is loads better but i cant use it cuz it has angelina jolie in the heade ... i was messing a bit ago wiv that but.......

    im remaking it and it looks pretty cool i'll show ya the end pic wen im done
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    I like that design, it works really well for a personal site. The design we've been critiquing works much better though as a professional/portfolio site.

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    yer your rite there ... i just dont know ow to make my headers and gd the ones ive came up with so far are cool but i like the ded gd 3d ones but i dont know how to make them,..

    i suppose id need a 3d program ... ah well
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    ok here's a look at the header... http://www.kirmandesign.co.uk/test/new.html

    tell me wot u think...
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