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    wot u all think to this?

    http://www.geocities.com/kirman2069/pain.html

    that is it's actual width and it will be aligned centre aswel....

    o and there is a footer it kinda got cut off on the screenshot...

    comments and suggestions plz
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    OOOOOH I like...

    The symbols under your logo will need alt texts...

    I don't think the "main content" tab index is a good idea. I dunno, it just looks a little out of place...?

    As for the rest - 5/5.
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    Over all its good. So Im going to be really picky now and say how I think you could improve it.

    Right, I like the header, although Im not sure it they suits the subject of your site as they look to me like they are speakers, and Im not sure if that really relates to well to graphic design in my opinion, although it does look right there (just if people really sat back and thought about it)

    The picture quality looks poor, but I expect you will slice the image and code it instead of designing your whole site in photoshop and then adding links in a html editor like dreamweaver by just adding hotspots and so forth, as there is no real webdesigner skills involved in that, and no doubt you will have clients come along who will want it done it html not and .jpg. (all of the avove may be completly wrong as you may have just taken a screen shot, if so I am sorry )lol

    But other then that it looks good, nice work.
    I like the layout of it and the navigation, although I hope the site isnt just one but picture. :S

    (sorry if it is just a screen shot)

    Well Done,

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    yer DanielOliver it is a screenshot and the quality of the screenshot is not of best quality lol

    I've removed the icons from the header as they look odd if you ask me..

    Yer it is my speaker and i thought it suited my design aswel as making my site different from other ppl's ...

    I cut it up in photoshop and then made it in notepad .. it's not done yet..

    but i've created some site templates and i rekon they are better than my actual site lol but oh well ...

    any more comments ?
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    Yeah I get that problem, I have made loads of templates for people and now I am stuck on ideas for my portfolio site. And its not helping when that site is your most important one, although saying that I am going right through it now and completly redesigning it in flash,

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    lol speaking of flash im getting my flash mx bible 2moz
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    Very nice... Crisp and clean

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    I like it a lot. The look and layout are excellent.

    I assume that this is not going to be the content for your main page, but a page you might navigate to to learn about graphic design.

    A little wordsmithing is in order. You have apostrophes for plurals and you misspelled "origional." I'd also get rid of the phrase "using different programs that I have available." If you can do something, tell people you can do it, don't tell them how you do it. In fact, don't tell them you "can" do it, just tell them "Here is what I will do for you."

    Really nice work.

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    Gives a real professional feel ya know,
    but it's not too business-like. I really
    like that. Good graphics, everything nicely
    intergrated...but is it truly the actual size?
    It looks a bit small for me, but I guess it's just me
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    here's another layout i created i think it's quite origional

    date in javascript on the header and a drop down menu (for a chnage)

    the black box is where ma sub headins will be (i havent made them yet)
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