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    First comment: learn to spell, Darnell. You make some rather glaring spelling errors throughout the site ("our" instead of "are", "absolutly" instead of "absolutely", etc.)

    Secondly, there's some sort of a weird white mark in your background on a few of the pages in the whitespace area. It looks really cheesey, whatever it's supposed to be.

    Rorschach test: It's two billygoats sharing a bag of weed. No wait, that's the scene in my front yard. Never mind.

    Okay, back to the site. It seems to take a really long time to load for some reason. In particular, there's one graphic on the opening page that takes forever to load if it even exists.

    Fourth: "You devise it" for a company called "IDeviseDesign.com" seems rather contradictory.

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    Senior Member [Li] Brad's Avatar
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    I agree, there are numerous spelling errors aound the site, but the overall design is nice. Maybe try to load that top banner once with PHP or something because it does take a long time to load.

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    I love the look and very Smooth! The font you used on the nav bar makes it hard to read(maybe its just me!)

    Looks like a good start

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    I agree w/ TheGame. Also, the Inquire and Contact pages seem redundant. 99.9% of people contacting you will be inquiring about your services. Those that aren't can still use the inquire form. Plus, putting AIM screen names and hotmail email addresses makes you look a lot less professional. Nice design, keep at it.

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    nice design it flows very well, idevisedesign.com would probably benefit from a diferent domain name and a degree in english.
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    Couldn't you have used CSS for those text rollovers, as all they do is change color plus they take a long time to load.


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