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    I am a senior in highschool and I have been working on a site to showcase my work and in order to show people that want me to do work what I can do. Everything is custom made. Please tell me how I can Improve this..
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    Senior Member DanielOliver's Avatar
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    Lose the counter, lose geocities, lose the big blocky text because it is unreadable.

    Its very basid, considering you are trying to sell your services, I dont think this site will do it for you I am afraid.

    I do however like the graphics, but the webdesign side of things is fairly poor in my opinon. Sorry if I sound harsh, but I did chuck in one compliment.

    I expect you would rather everyone be honest then turn around and say yeah it's great.

    You just need to work on it a lot more, expecially the font, that is awfull.

    Good luck,
    Daniel.

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    gotta go with Daniel on this one. It's not very good for a portfolio site. Black is a difficult color to pull of correctly.

    The font you used (looks like impact) is terrible. Use a standard web friendly font (verdana, arial) stay away from Times. I'm not a big fan of the navigation for the page either. It seems to run together, and it looks bad.

    The image is nice! If you're going to use it as a basis for your design, try taking some of the colors in it and use that for your color scheme. The light blue would look great for a background. Don't get discouraged by the comments...they help. My first site looked like *** when I designed it.


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