Can you please comment on the following two links, but please IGNORE
the banner at the top of the first design, it was only to give you some idea with all the spaces filled in. (neither are finished)
http://www.danieloliver.net/ (IGNORE BANNER)
http://www.danieloliver.net/22/
How could I improve both? And which one do you prefer? Should I start again?
Lots of work is still needed but I need a general idea of how you guys think they are coming on.
thank you,
Daniel Oliver.