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    Junior Member ClementsConnect's Avatar
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    Hey Everyone,

    I've been looking at everyone else's sites and they seem to be pretty good, the feedback is great. So I thought I'd give it a try. I have two sites that are up for some feedback, don't hold back.

    http://www.clementsconnect.com

    http://www.clementsconnect.com/nec/

    Thank you

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    Senior Member kirman's Avatar
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    i havent been on WDF in ages so bare with me on my comments lol.

    Your design doesnt fit on my screen and im at 1027 X 768 (i think thats ma res lol)

    you have a hit counter and they dont look profesional at all.

    The header up top could do with a photoshop makeover and the grey dull colours dont give your site the type of warm jungle feeling it needs.

    change your links and it is annoyign having that pop up message "right click here" i'd remove that...

    thats just my 10pence worth :-D

    ahhh gd to be back lol
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    Colours and layout are fine.

    Picture in the middle with the two people in suits is good, where do you get photos like that done? Do you just get some of your co-workers to jump up and you take a photo of them :P or did you go through some photo agency?

    Anyway, my main criticism is that you list the same thing twice. The features are on the left hand side and then on the right hand side you state it again. Maybe replace whats on the left with why you are better than all the other hosting companys.

    The second site doesnt fit on my screen and I'm at 1024*768. Considering most people are at 800*600 I would really consider making it scale since its very annoying to scroll across. Theres a bit of whitespace doing nothing in the middle section anyway so this shouldn't be a problem. I think also once it becomes more compact it will look better also.

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    http://www.clementsconnect.com/nec/- Looks good but is a very very big design and it to large, you deffinatley need to make it a lot smaller.

    Remove the hit counter.

    Make it smaller and we can have a nother look and see what it looks like.

    http://www.clementsconnect.com/- This one is a lot better but it is just a little bare in my opinion. There is a lot of white areas which need to be sorted out. This one is just a little plain so you need to spice it up a little.

    Good luck,
    Daniel.

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    http://www.clementsconnect.com/- is hard to read "Clements" in your header because of the font, maybe make it a little easier to read.

    [Li] Brad
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    http://www.clementsconnect.com/ - Nice and expensive :P

    http://www.clementsconnect.com/nec/ - Doesnt fit on my screen + what is this site all about ?

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    Summary of what you've all said:

    For http://www.clementsconnect.com/nec

    Change the size of it to fit on the screen. (Didn't know I had this problem, worked on three different browsers on different comps)

    Remove hit counter (should have already done that)

    Get rid of dull colors(yeah ok)

    Give it a PhotoShop makeover (I'll try)

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    And for http://www.clementsconnect.com

    Too much white space (I'm sure I can fill that)

    Logo too hard to read "Clements" (hmmm I'll look into that)

    Spice it up! (ok)

    Expensive? (I need a please explain, for what we offer this is pretty good. Don't forget prices are in Australian dollars)

    Ok well I'm not going to get to work on it just yet, I don't think. So I'll let you all know when I make some updates to both sites. Thank you for everyone's comments. Keep them comming if theres more to say!

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    Those prices are fine.

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    The first URL you posted looks like an offer sheet, not a homepage. The second I click on your link, you're asking me for money, and I have no idea who you are, where you are, and why I should choose you. Add some content instead of just listing your features/prices.

    As for the second site, it's not bad. A thin outline around the blue areas might look good.

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