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    Ladies and Gentlemen,

    I would greatly appreciate some feedback on the design of my website at http://www.writingwizard.com.au/

    This is about the 5th time I've redesigned my site, but I think it needs a bit of professional feedback. When it comes time (i.e. when I can afford it) to get some professional work done on it, I would like to already know what my site's weaknesses are.

    Thank you very much.

    Damien
    Writing Wizard Editing and Proofreading

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    Senior Member ironhacker's Avatar
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    Well there are some stuff that can help you:

    - put 5px before the text on the main page
    - change the pictures of your Home Page, E-mail, Order... with identical ones.
    - remove all images from your left menu, and put text instead of them.

    Well, that's about it for now.

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    Senior Member sarab's Avatar
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    I quite liked your basic theme.

    But I thought your pages were inconsistent. You use various fonts on different pages for headers.
    You have text cramped up tight on your 'Services' page. Give it more white space. It's 'free' on the Net; you're not wasting paper.

    Also, your little wizard is sometimes perched on the grey navbar, and sometimes levitating. I'm assuming that wasn't necessarily the effect you chose?

    And, as strictly a visitor to the site (not from a designer POV that is) you've gone overboard with the images (one for each para heading qualifies as overboard for me).

    But with some tidying, as per the suggestions in other replies, it should be a fine site for your purposes.

    Good luck

    SaraB
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    My best pal's site: Algarve Beach Life :ichatcool:

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    Junior Member relaxzoolander's Avatar
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    i think the google search is overkill for your site size.
    a search also takes the visitor away from you site...not good.

    all of your images are very 'clip-arty'.
    a more professional site would have more professional and unique images that work together more consistently to develop a 'brand' for your company.

    a logo would also help to develop a more professional identity.

    good luck.

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    Thanks everyone. I agree with all the comments and will get some nice images when possible.

    Again, thanks for the input.


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